Don’t Get Duped – 5 Red Flags of a Professionally Written Resume

At 180one, we see A LOT of resumes. Some look like they were typed on a Brother Word Processor 30 years ago, some are 6 pages long, 2 pages long, some have different fonts and sizes of fonts throughout, and then there are third party professionally written resumes - easy to spot, hard to comprehend, and make the reader ask the question – if the candidate can’t write their own resume, what else can’t they do that they said they’ve done?


In the high-stakes world of job hunting, a well-polished resume is believed to be the gateway to securing an interview. As a result, many job seekers turn to professional resume writers to boost their chances. While this can be helpful, it can also create inconsistencies and red flags that hiring managers and recruiters quickly learn to recognize.


If you're on the hiring side or the job seeking side, here are 5 factors to consider when reviewing or submitting a professionally written resume.



1. Overly Polished or “Corporate” Language

One of the most obvious signs is language that sounds more like a press release than a personal statement. Phrases like “forward-thinking professional with a proven track record of leveraging synergistic strategies” may impress at first glance—but they often signal a generic, massaged resume.


Why it’s a red flag:
Recruiters are increasingly wary of “buzzword bingo.” In fact, a 2022 study by Cultivated Culture found that over 50% of resumes included vague jargon or fluff that made it difficult to identify actual achievements.

Many professionally written resumes are filled with generic buzzwords like "results-driven," "synergy," and "dynamic leader." While these terms may sound impressive, they often lack substance and fail to convey meaningful information about a candidate's actual skills or achievements. According to a study by Cultivated Culture, 51% of resumes included fluffy buzzwords, clichés, or the incorrect use of pronouns, which can turn off potential recruiters.



2. Mismatch Between Resume and LinkedIn Profile

Professionally written resumes often use a distinct tone, layout, and terminology. If a candidate’s LinkedIn profile is far less polished or completely different in format and language, it could indicate the resume was outsourced.


Why it’s a red flag:
Consistency matters. Hiring managers want to see that a candidate has a clear sense of their professional identity. Discrepancies raise questions about authenticity.



3. Inability to Explain Resume Content in Interviews

When a resume is written by someone else, candidates often struggle to elaborate on the content. They might stumble over project details, metrics, or use terminology incorrectly. And sometimes, the candidate just comes right out and say that they had someone else write it for them – which then opens up a bunch of assumptions of the candidate.


Why it’s a red flag:
You can’t trust a resume at face value if the candidate can’t speak to it with confidence and clarity. It shows that they lack ownership of their work product (or the work product of someone who they hired).



4. Generic or Inflated Achievements

Third-party writers often try to make every bullet point sound impressive, even when the underlying work was basic. A line like “Spearheaded initiatives to drive cross-departmental alignment” might describe routine weekly meetings.


Why it’s a red flag:
Inflation makes it harder to evaluate the real value a candidate brings. It also shows a disconnect between what they actually did and how it's being presented. Plus, does your organization need another blowhard in the conference room who controls the meeting with word salad?



5. Too much information being presented

While everyone thinks that AI is controlling the review of every resume and that you need to have every keyword included in your resume to make it to the next step when applying, the truth is that at some point the resume will be reviewed by a human. Professionally written resumes tend to be jam packed with information with visually stunning sections, tables of information, and varying fonts to draw the eye – but it’s just too much for the reader to comprehend what you’ve actually done.


Why it’s a red flag:

Employers are looking for future leaders who know how to convey their thoughts, ideas, questions succinctly. So if you are unable to accomplish this with your resume – that you’ve had plenty of time to write, edit, modify before distributing – what will happen when you’re on the job presenting in the boardroom?



Final Thoughts


A professionally written resume isn’t inherently bad, many candidates benefit from outside help, especially if they’re unsure how to present themselves. However, authenticity matters. When hiring managers sense that a resume doesn’t align with the person behind it, they’ll dig deeper and often move on to more transparent candidates.


Resumes are personal. They are a summary of all that one has accomplished in their career. This is their professional fingerprint and no one else should have the same fingerprint. So, make sure that the next time you are updating or creating a new resume, make it yours, not someone else’s or trying to be someone you’re not.


By Effie Zimmerman • October 13, 2026
Chief Financial Officer ABOUT THE COMPANY Kenworth Sales Company is a multi-generation, family-owned commercial truck dealership founded in 1945 and headquartered in West Valley City, Utah. With more than 1,400 employees across 38 locations, the company provides comprehensive truck sales, parts, service, leasing, rental, and financing solutions throughout the Intermountain West and Mid-Atlantic regions. Recognized as Kenworth Dealer of the Year in both 2020 and 2025, Kenworth Sales Company has built its reputation on quality products, superior service, and a long-standing commitment to its customers and communities. ABOUT THE POSITION Reporting directly to the President, the Chief Financial Officer provides strategic leadership and oversight across accounting, financial reporting, compliance, information technology, security and risk management, finance, and treasury. As a key member of the senior leadership team, the CFO plays an integral role in shaping the Company’s business strategy, financial direction, capital planning, and overall operations. Essential Duties and Responsibilities SENIOR MANAGEMENT Actively participate as a member of senior management to execute the company’s business strategy. Establish and maintain effective working relationships with the dealer principal, board of directors, family business council, president, COO’s, and senior management. Ensure compliance with the company’s vision, mission, and values. Coordinate the preparation of annual business plans for all departments, including forecasts for future business growth, general economic, industry, and financial conditions. Analyze financial operations and identify areas of improvement. Develop innovative and effective financing strategies to support Company operations and growth. Evaluate growth opportunities including valuation analysis, due diligence, financing, risk assessment, purchase agreement support, and post-acquisition integration planning. Develop and foster productive relationships with outside tax, legal, accounting, banking, insurance, and investment advisors as appropriate to support succession planning for ownership and management. FINANCIAL REPORTING Supervise the company’s accounting and financial reporting systems. Ensure financial statements fully and accurately represent the financial position of Company operations and comply with GAAP standards. Design, maintain, and enforce appropriate internal controls, approval authorities, segregation of duties, financial policies, and fraud prevention processes to safeguard Company assets and ensure the integrity of financial reporting and business practices. Ensure reporting compliance with government authorities and regulators, franchisors, and funding institutions. Engage and coordinate all audit functions as directed by the board of directors. Coordinate and supervise internal audits for compliance with Corporate financial standards and related Company policies and procedures. Develop and maintain financial dashboards, key performance indicators, variance analyses, and management reporting tools that provide Management timely insight into financial performance, profitability, liquidity, departmental results, and emerging business trends. RISK MANAGEMENT Supervise the company's risk oversight, including the identification, management, and remediation of physical, virtual, reputational, financial, strategic, and operational risks inherent in all Company operations. Engage and effectively manage physical damage, liability, and business operations insurance coverage, loss prevention, cybersecurity, etc. CASH MANAGEMENT Supervise the company's cash flow. Develop and review pro forma financial and cash flow forecasts to ensure adequate money supply for Company operations. Oversee customer account services, including the receivables process. Develop and maintain strong banking and lender relationships including credit facilities, borrowing capacity, debt obligations, lender reporting, covenant compliance, and other treasury activities. Administer the company's financial obligations, ensuring compliance with contract terms including accounts payable and payment schedules. INFORMATION TECHNOLOGY Supervise the company’s information technology (IT) program, including cybersecurity oversight, systems reliability, data protection, software and vendor management, disaster recovery planning, business continuity support, and technology initiatives. QUALIFICATIONS Bachelor’s degree in accounting, finance, business, or related field required; MBA and/or CPA preferred. Minimum of 10 years of progressively responsible experience in senior financial, accounting, or audit roles, with experience operating at a leadership level. Strong knowledge of GAAP, financial reporting, corporate compliance, financial analysis, acquisitions, and negotiations. Experience with business operations, information technology, and/or the heavy-truck or commercial vehicle industry preferred. Demonstrated ability to lead, develop, and retain high-performing teams while improving organizational effectiveness. Excellent communication, interpersonal, organizational, time-management, and decision-making skills. Ability to analyze complex business issues, develop sound financial and business-case recommendations, and communicate them effectively to senior leadership. Ability to work independently, manage multiple priorities, and operate effectively in a fast-paced, changing business environment. Willingness and ability to travel as needed for business purposes. Interested in Learning More? 180one has been retained by Kenworth Sales Company to manage this search. If interested in learning more about the opportunity, please contact Lisa Heffernan / 971.256.3076/ lisa@180one.com .
By Effie Zimmerman • September 16, 2026
General Manager- Leasing ABOUT THE COMPANY With roots dating back to 1938, The Papé Group is the West’s leading supplier of capital equipment solutions. Today, Papé operates across nine states with over 4,000 team members, proudly representing premier brands including John Deere, Kenworth, Hyster, Ditch Witch, and more. What sets Papé apart is its commitment to long-term relationships, both with customers and employees. As a fourth-generation, family-led business, Papé believes in the value of a handshake, the importance of service, and the impact of leadership that stays close to the work. Papé Kenworth is one of the largest Kenworth truck dealers in the Western United States, providing sales, leasing, rental, parts, and service for medium and heavy-duty trucks. Founded in 2007 as part of Papé Group, the division supports commercial fleets and owner-operators with a commitment to maximizing uptime through exceptional customer service, expert technicians, and a network of locations across the West. ABOUT THE POSITION Reporting to the President of the Papé Kenworth business, the General Manager (GM) of Leasing will be responsible for all Papé PacLease company operations and performance. General areas of responsibility will include business planning, profitable business growth, asset management and profitability, vehicle maintenance standards, and the profitable sale of vehicles at the end of the leasing term. Additionally, this position will oversee the short term rental fleet and lease return sales, contract maintenance, rental performance, and financial and personnel management for this division. This role demands a strategic mindset, operational oversight, and a strong leadership presence to guide branch teams in delivering outstanding service, sales, and profitability. Essential Duties and Responsibilities Develop and execute the overall strategic plan for the leasing division, including revenue, profitability, fleet growth, operational standards, utilization, customer service, and retention. Establish annual and long-term business plans, budgets, forecasts, and performance goals. Drive revenue growth while maintaining disciplined control of expenses and operating costs. Manage fleet acquisition costs, depreciation, residual values, financing costs, maintenance expenses, insurance, and other major components of leasing profitability. Oversee the acquisition, deployment, utilization, maintenance, and disposition of fleet vehicles. Develop and manage processes and procedures for management and tracking of assets, including accurate visibility into lifecycle costs and total costs of ownership. Lead and develop the sales team and strategies for sales and customer acquisition. Establish a disciplined sales process, pipeline process, and forecasting. Ensure compliance with all applicable federal, state, and local regulations. Recruit, develop, motivate, and retain a high-performing leasing organization. Collaborate with dealership leadership to create a unified culture and operating strategy for the Leasing business. CANDIDATE PROFILE The ideal candidate brings a proven track record of successful management experience in commercial truck leasing or dealership environments. Key strengths include: Proven track record of successful management experience within the dealership or leasing environment. Demonstrated experience in developing teams, setting performance goals, and achieving sales targets. Experience developing and executing sales strategies that consistently exceed revenue and profitability targets. Experience leading and developing standard operating procedures for lease operations, asset maintenance and utilization, customer qualification, lease structuring and pricing, long-term leasing contracts, and customer communication. Preferred Bachelor’s degree is preferred, or equivalent combination of education and progressively responsible industry experience. 10+ years of progressive leadership experience in truck dealership or leasing sales and operations. Minimum of 5 years in leadership roles. Interested in Learning More? 180one is an executive search firm and is assisting Papé Group in this search. If interested in learning more about the opportunity, please contact Tom Haley/ 503.334.1350/ tom@180one.com .
By Effie Zimmerman • August 13, 2026
Chief Operations Officer ABOUT THE COMPANY STUDSON is a fast-growing safety technology company based in Sherwood, Oregon, redefining industrial head protection. Founded in 2019, the company designs premium Type II safety helmets that incorporate advanced impact protection technology commonly found in sports helmets, helping construction and industrial workers get home safely every day. Driven by innovation and a strong mission, STUDSON is challenging a century of conventional hard hat design and is quickly becoming a recognized leader in the industrial safety market. ABOUT THE ROLE STUDSON is transforming industrial head protection through innovative technology, premium product design, and an uncompromising commitment to worker safety. Having established a strong market position and a solid operational foundation, the company is entering its next phase of growth. To support that growth, STUDSON is seeking a Chief Operating Officer to build the organizational operating system that will enable the business to scale while preserving the speed, innovation, and entrepreneurial culture that define the company today. Reporting directly to the Founder & CEO, the COO will be responsible for translating strategy into disciplined execution across the organization. While overseeing the company's operational functions—including supply chain, sourcing, planning, customer success, and quality —the primary mandate is broader: to create alignment, accountability, and repeatable processes that allow the organization to execute consistently as it grows. This executive will partner closely with every functional leader to improve cross-functional collaboration, strengthen decision-making, and establish operational processes that allow the business to move faster with greater clarity. Success will not be measured by maintaining operations, but by building an organization capable of scaling efficiently while delivering exceptional customer and financial outcomes. The ideal candidate is an experienced operator who has helped high-growth companies evolve from entrepreneurial organizations into disciplined, process-driven businesses without sacrificing agility or innovation. Essential Duties and Responsibilities Organizational Leadership & Operating Excellence Partner with the CEO to translate strategic priorities into company-wide execution plans. Design and implement a scalable business operating system that establishes standard work, management routines, visual performance management, and continuous improvement practices across the organization. Champion a culture of continuous improvement, equipping leaders with practical problem-solving methodologies that eliminate waste, improve execution, and increase organizational agility. Lead cross-functional process improvement initiatives that simplify workflows, reduce complexity, and improve quality, speed, and customer outcomes. Build management processes that improve alignment, accountability, communication, and execution across all functions. Develop an organization capable of scaling efficiently without creating unnecessary bureaucracy. Process Improvement & Business Scalability Lead the continuous evolution of business processes across the organization, leveraging existing technology platforms to improve execution rather than adding complexity. Standardize workflows where appropriate while preserving flexibility and entrepreneurial speed. Identify operational bottlenecks and implement practical solutions that improve throughput, responsiveness, and organizational effectiveness. Foster a culture of continuous improvement, disciplined execution, and data-informed decision-making. Supply Chain & Operational Performance Lead the end-to-end supply chain, including procurement, manufacturing partners, inventory planning, logistics, fulfillment, and customer success. Ensure operational capabilities support both current growth and future product expansion. Strengthen forecasting, inventory management, and S&OP disciplines to improve service levels while optimizing working capital. Build resilient supplier relationships and continuously improve quality, delivery, and cost performance. Cross-Functional Execution Partner with Product Development to ensure successful commercialization of new products. Collaborate with Sales and Marketing to improve demand planning, product availability, and customer responsiveness. Work closely with Finance to improve forecasting accuracy, margin performance, and operational planning. Support Human Resources in developing organizational capability, leadership effectiveness, and performance management. Business Performance Develop meaningful KPI’s and operational scorecards that provide visibility into company performance. Improve operational efficiency, gross margin, inventory productivity, customer satisfaction, and organizational responsiveness. Balance growth, profitability, and operational risk while maintaining STUDSON's commitment to quality and customer experience. People & Culture Build and develop a high-performing operational team grounded in accountability, collaboration, and continuous improvement. Create clarity around expectations, priorities, and decision rights throughout the organization. Help preserve STUDSON's entrepreneurial culture while introducing the operational discipline required for continued growth. IDEAL CANDIDATE Fifteen or more years of progressive leadership experience in operations, supply chain, or general management within a high-growth manufacturing organization. Demonstrated experience implementing or leading a business operating system such as Lean, the Toyota Production System, or a comparable continuous improvement framework that improved organizational performance and scalability. Strong understanding of operational excellence principles, including process mapping, root cause analysis, visual management, standard work, and KPI-driven performance management. Proven ability to build continuous improvement capabilities within leadership teams by coaching managers to solve problems systematically and sustain operational gains. Experience leading cross-functional business transformation rather than simply managing functional operations. Strong understanding of supply chain, sourcing, manufacturing, inventory planning, and customer operations. Proven ability to leverage an ERP and business systems to improve execution, reporting, and decision-making. Strong financial acumen with experience improving margins, working capital, and operational performance. Exceptional leadership presence with the ability to influence across functions and levels. Comfortable operating in an entrepreneurial, founder-led environment where adaptability, humility, and hands-on leadership are essential. Interested in Learning More? 180one has been retained by STUDSON to manage this search. If interested in learning more about the opportunity, please contact Tom Haley / 503.334.1350/ tom@180one.com .
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