5 Ways to Win Your Candidate During the Offer

5 Ways to Win Your Candidate During the Offer

You’ve conducted the initial executive search and several rounds of interviews; now you’ve found THE candidate who will bring that edge you’ve been looking for to your organization. Your work is over, right? Not quite.


Hiring managers often make the mistake of thinking the work is finished after they have made the offer, but maintaining focus and staying engaged in the final moments of the recruiting process are critical to securing a candidate.


You may be tempted to assume candidates are interested because they remained in the recruiting process. After narrowing the pool down to one choice, though, the decision to accept now lies in the hands of the candidate. With the finish line in sight, your organization must see the recruiting process through to receive a “Yes” from the other side of the table.


Today on The Water Cooler, we discuss 5 ways to ensure that you come out on the winning end when making an offer to a candidate.


Ask the Right Questions


To win your candidate, you must first master your phrasing. Instead of asking if a candidate wants the offer, ask if they want the job.


Every candidate wants an offer; receiving it makes them feel wanted and like they “won” the recruiting process. What hiring managers do not want, though, is to extend an offer that will be rejected.


Asking the candidate if they want the job can help you avoid delivering an offer that will be turned down. You may learn that, while the candidate is interested, they still have questions about the opportunity. Allowing them the chance to complete their own vetting process leads to more informed decision making and a higher likelihood that they will accept. Moreover, once the candidate has finished their own evaluation process and communicated that they want the position, you can decide how to craft the offer.


Find Out What Matters


From vacation time and healthcare to equity and retirement plans, candidates place different priorities on different offer components. Understanding what matters most to the candidate is critical in making a successful offer.


For example, when relocating candidates, covering or subsidizing one-time moving costs speaks volumes to them and their families. Spouses/significant others, children and other family members will be equally impacted by relocation, and their opinions may influence a candidate’s final decision. Making the gesture to assist with the move can garner buy-in from everyone involved, including the candidate, and lead to an accepted offer.


Get Creative


Creativity with compensation, benefits and other offer components can play a crucial role in ensuring a “Yes” from your candidate. Unable to raise the base salary for the position? Try including a signing bonus or adding additional vacation time to increase compensation. Providing equity, long-term incentive plans (LTIPs) or accelerated vesting can also help sweeten the deal for a candidate.


Outside of competitive compensation, companies may also offer car allowances, monthly parking, flexible work hours or the opportunity to work remotely in order to attract candidates. No matter what benefits you choose to provide, make sure that you continue to think about what matters most to your candidate.


Make It Personal


No one likes the generic “Dear Candidate…” email. Both your organization and the candidate invest time and resources into the process, so see the effort through by making your offer over the phone or in person.


Verbally extending an offer also doubles as a safeguard to rejection. Directly talking with candidates provides them the opportunity to ask any final questions they may have about the role, as well as presents the opportunity for them to accept before you initiate the necessary paperwork.


You should also allow a candidate adequate time to think over and respond to an offer. Delivering an offer on a Friday is advantageous. Your organization won’t lose any working days while the candidate considers the offer, and the candidate has a chance to unplug, process and discuss with other potential decision influencers before accepting.


Put Your Best Foot Forward


With a solid understanding of your candidate’s needs and goals, you can craft an offer letter that will be accepted outright, rather than entering into a negotiation.


Putting your best offer forward indicates that there is less to negotiate and signals how the candidate will be treated in the future at your organization – like their needs are being met versus being “nickel and dimed” each year with raises and bonuses.


Recruiting firms provide a major advantage in this final step; as third party providers, we are able to prompt candidates to disclose their true financial/benefits figures to understand what the best offer should look like and ultimately bring both sides of the table together.


Making an offer is a big step for both your company and the candidate. Completing the entire recruiting process is key to not only winning the candidate but also setting your organization up for success to retain top talent.


Want more insight? Check out our latest article Philosophy, Data and Structure; A Simple Guide to Executive Compensation or contact us to discuss your hiring needs for your next critical role.


By Catherine Landgraf June 11, 2025
Vice President, Aftermarket ABOUT THE COMPANY Dover’s Vehicle Service Group is the global leader in designing and manufacturing vehicle service, collision and automotive OEM equipment. It is one of the founding companies of Dover Corporation, an eight billion dollar diversified global manufacturer. VSG consists of fifteen leading vehicle lifting brands (Rotary, Forward, Blitz, Ravaglioli, etc.), collision repair (Chief), wheel services, diagnostics (Butler, Rotary, Chief and Ravaglioli) and tier-one automotive brands (WARN Automotive) with operations worldwide, including regional business operation centers and large manufacturing facilities in the U.S., Europe and Asia. ABOUT THE ROLE Responsible for developing and executing the VSG Parts and Service business strategy in the Americas. This is a critical leadership role that requires strategic thinking, operational excellence, and the ability to inspire and motivate cross-functional teams to achieve Aftermarket objectives while exceeding customer expectations. ESSENTIAL DUTIES AND RESPONSIBILITIES Develop and implement a Parts and Service strategy to increase market share and add growth opportunities by leveraging complimentary products to the existing offering’s portfolio. Create a marketing strategy for recommending parts and services to existing customers and an outlet to attract new conquest customers using the Parts and Service area of the business. Partner with internal Supply Chain teams to develop an inventory stocking and replenishment model to ensure business success. Partner with dealers to develop a shared inventory and consumption model with clear visibility of parts supply in addition to developing incentives to drive the right behaviors. Stay current with industry and market trends and apply learnings to the VSG Aftermarket strategy. Create detailed budgets and forecasts, including annual sales and profitability targets to meet business and company financial and growth goals. Track and report internal progress to targets, utilizing technology and automation to reduce errors and administrative burden. Direct and coordinate activities relating to part quotations, including ensuring e-commerce ease of use. Developing innovative techniques for recommending parts and services to customers that generate incremental sales. Appraise existing offerings compared to competitors in terms of price, specifications, and delivery model and recommending changes in sales techniques, process design, or other procedures as necessary to achieve goals. Communicate regularly with internal functional teams including Operations, Service, Training, and Sales to effectively manage and grow and develop the parts and service processes. Motivate and inspire a team to achieve company goals and foster an environment of personal development and leadership growth opportunities. CRITICAL SHORT-TERM OBJECTIVES Develop and implement the Aftermarket structure and business strategy that: Expand parts and service market share. Improve supplier and customer network capabilities. Create higher levels of customer satisfaction and loyalty. Generate growth and expansion of the business into a new segment. Access and align internal resources needed to execute the enhanced Aftermarket business strategy. OVERALL QUALIFICATIONS – Skills and Experience Deep understanding of Parts and Service market in the Americas. Minimum of 10 years of progressive experience with parts and service delivery models. Proven track record of successfully transforming parts and service organizations to improve efficiency, productivity, and profitability. Strong leadership skills with the ability to inspire and motivate cross-functional teams. Excellent analytical and problem-solving skills, with the ability to identify root causes and implement effective corrective actions. Strong communication skills, both written and verbal, with the ability to effectively communicate complex concepts to diverse audiences. Demonstrated ability to work in a fast-paced, dynamic environment and adapt to changing priorities within all levels of the organization. KEY DOVER COMPETENCIES Customer Impact : Creates value for customers addressing known and unknown needs. Knows and understands all aspects of the global market, including: economics (regulatory issues, corporate compliance, etc.), products and services, channels, the customers and their end-markets. Strategic Mindset : Has understanding of global industry or market; creates breakthrough strategies that alter the competitive dynamics in a market, and establishes a series of competitive advantages yielding profitability that exceeds expectations for the organization. Results Driven : Produces results that exceed Dover’s strategic objectives via a combination of planning and implementation, while living the Dover Values. Strong Business Acumen and Sound Judgment : Uses instinct as well as data to accurately assess business situations and industry trends; makes timely, appropriate decisions and implements appropriate plans while living the Dover Values. Winning the Right Way : Operates with High Ethical Standards, Openness and Trust. Conducts him/herself with high ethical standards and fosters a culture in the organization to conduct business aligned with those standards. Builds and Manages Collaborative Relationships : Establishes and nurtures numerous relationships within Dover. Takes action to partner with the communities in which we operate and to be an appropriate corporate citizen. Interested in Learning More? 180one has been engaged by VSG to manage this search. If interested in learning more about the opportunity, please contact Lisa Heffernan / 971.256.3076/ lisa@180one.com .
By Greg Togni June 10, 2025
Vice President of Sales & Marketing ABOUT THE COMPANY Dover’s Vehicle Service Group (VSG), is the global leader in designing and manufacturing vehicle service, collision and automotive OEM equipment. It is one of the founding companies of Dover Corporation, an eight billion dollar diversified global manufacturer. VSG consists of fifteen leading vehicle lifting brands (Rotary, Forward, Blitz, Ravaglioli etc.), collision repair (Chief), wheel services, diagnostics (Butler, Rotary, Chief and Ravaglioli) and tier-one automotive brands (WARN Automotive) with operations worldwide, including regional business operation centers and large manufacturing facilities in the U.S., Europe and Asia. ABOUT THE POSITION Reporting to the Vice President (VP) & General Manager, VSG NSA , the Vice President (VP) of Sales and Marketing will lead the strategy, development, and execution of all sales and marketing initiatives to drive profitable revenue growth, market share, and brand visibility for VSG, NSA. This position will build, mentor, and manage high-performing teams while working cross-functionally to align business goals and customer needs. The VP will play a key role in shaping the company’s growth strategy and ensuring its leadership position in the market. RESPONSIBILITIES : Sales: Develop plans and strategies for achieving the company’s sales goals. Own the Annual Sales Plan and three-year strategy for driving growth in core business, identified adjacencies, and initiatives. Define sales processes, systems, and infrastructure that drive desired sales outcomes, identify improvements, and provide detailed and accurate sales forecasting. Create a culture of success and ongoing business and goal achievement. Become known as an employer of choice and a customer-facing team that top sales and customer service professionals want to join. Manage customer expectations and serve as the chief customer advocate within the business. Manage key customer relationships and participate in closing strategic opportunities. Travel for in-person meetings with customers and channel partners to foster key relationships. Drive product / services roadmap and definitions with Product Management including corresponding business models and pricing backed by marketplace analysis of customer requirements and competitive offerings/positions. Identify product gaps and improvement opportunities to provide superior, customer focused products. Collaborate with Product Management and cross functional teams to realize products in a cost effective, timely manner. Pursue alternative sales channels and customer segments to expand and leverage penetration of product offerings. Develop sales tools and sales management approaches to maximize effectiveness of direct sales and channel sales forces. Pursue sales force automation (leverage CRM solution) for all field sales personnel to streamline processes, reduce costs, and improve communication. Marketing: Assist in transitioning an internally focused business with strong Brand and Product reputation to that of a customer centric organization focused on delivering broader service and experiences customers will pay for. Develop and lead Voice of the Customer programs and insights, managing and scaling our support teams, and working closely with Product Management, Engineering, Sales, IT, Dover Central functions, and management to continuously improve the customer experience Establish KPIs to measure achievement of objectives across the organization, especially in activation, qualified leads, conversion, NPS and end customer satisfaction. Ensure marketing effectiveness, customer engagement, and conversion. Manage monthly review of promotions, product launches, trade shows, catalog, and digital activation with respective commercial and product leaders. Maintain 18 month rolling view, ensure spend aligns to budget, and track spend to results. Partner with Corp Marketing function to ensure consistent marketing across global Brands, and aligned internal and external communications. CRITICAL OBJECTIVES NEXT 2-3 YEARS Develop and execute VSG’s long-term Sales, Channel, and Customer strategy. Consider existing and new product portfolio, regions, channels within core and non-core business. Evaluate core Sales and Marketing organizations to drive sales and streamline responsibility for VSG team, Partners, and National Rep agencies. Make recommendations and implement a new organization, key talent, and investments. Optimize customer and partner focus to drive growth through most valuable and growable customers. Ensure highly professional account-based sales planning/management occurs with all top customers (weekly, monthly, quarterly). Put in place a predictable sales planning and execution tool that supports business planning and SIOP. Ensure clear metrics and tools are utilized to provide stakeholder clarity. OVERALL QUALIFICATIONS – Skills and Experience Master’s degree in applicable field of study Minimum 10 years experience in related roles supporting premium brands Self-motivated work ethic with a strong sense of urgency Demonstrated transformational leadership experience Extensive experience with leading successful sales and marketing teams Confident presentation and public speaking skills Excellent verbal and written communication skills Ability to build positive relationships at all levels of the organization Strong business acumen; strategic and analytic thinker Ability and willingness to travel KEY DOVER COMPETENCIES: Builds and Manages Collaborative Relationships: Establishes and nurtures numerous relationships within VSG and Dover. Takes action to partner with the communities in which we operate and to be an appropriate corporate citizen. Change Leadership: Aligns an organization and its people to drive for improvement and adopt new, challenging directions. Energizes a whole organization to want to change in the same direction. Influences others in a mature and empowering manner. Motivates and Inspires: Creates an environment that stimulates others to follow. Builds teams that fully use individuals’ capabilities, creating results beyond just the sum of the parts. Self-Awareness and Personal Development: Role models a personal leadership style that includes self-awareness; accepts feedback, understands and maximizes strengths while working to overcome weaknesses. Interested in Learning More? 180one has been engaged by VSG to manage this search. If interested in learning more about the opportunity, please contact Lisa Heffernan / 971.256.3076/ lisa@180one.com .
By Greg Togni June 6, 2025
At 180one, we see A LOT of resumes. Some look like they were typed on a Brother Word Processor 30 years ago, some are 6 pages long, 2 pages long, some have different fonts and sizes of fonts throughout, and then there are third party professionally written resumes - easy to spot, hard to comprehend, and make the reader ask the question – if the candidate can’t write their own resume, what else can’t they do that they said they’ve done? In the high-stakes world of job hunting, a well-polished resume is believed to be the gateway to securing an interview. As a result, many job seekers turn to professional resume writers to boost their chances. While this can be helpful, it can also create inconsistencies and red flags that hiring managers and recruiters quickly learn to recognize. If you're on the hiring side or the job seeking side, here are 5 factors to consider when reviewing or submitting a professionally written resume. 1. Overly Polished or “Corporate” Language One of the most obvious signs is language that sounds more like a press release than a personal statement. Phrases like “forward-thinking professional with a proven track record of leveraging synergistic strategies” may impress at first glance—but they often signal a generic, massaged resume. Why it’s a red flag: Recruiters are increasingly wary of “buzzword bingo.” In fact, a 2022 study by Cultivated Culture found that over 50% of resumes included vague jargon or fluff that made it difficult to identify actual achievements. Many professionally written resumes are filled with generic buzzwords like "results-driven," "synergy," and "dynamic leader." While these terms may sound impressive, they often lack substance and fail to convey meaningful information about a candidate's actual skills or achievements. According to a study by Cultivated Culture, 51% of resumes included fluffy buzzwords, clichés, or the incorrect use of pronouns, which can turn off potential recruiters. 2. Mismatch Between Resume and LinkedIn Profile Professionally written resumes often use a distinct tone, layout, and terminology. If a candidate’s LinkedIn profile is far less polished or completely different in format and language, it could indicate the resume was outsourced. Why it’s a red flag: Consistency matters. Hiring managers want to see that a candidate has a clear sense of their professional identity. Discrepancies raise questions about authenticity. 3. Inability to Explain Resume Content in Interviews When a resume is written by someone else, candidates often struggle to elaborate on the content. They might stumble over project details, metrics, or use terminology incorrectly. And sometimes, the candidate just comes right out and say that they had someone else write it for them – which then opens up a bunch of assumptions of the candidate. Why it’s a red flag: You can’t trust a resume at face value if the candidate can’t speak to it with confidence and clarity. It shows that they lack ownership of their work product (or the work product of someone who they hired). 4. Generic or Inflated Achievements Third-party writers often try to make every bullet point sound impressive, even when the underlying work was basic. A line like “Spearheaded initiatives to drive cross-departmental alignment” might describe routine weekly meetings. Why it’s a red flag: Inflation makes it harder to evaluate the real value a candidate brings. It also shows a disconnect between what they actually did and how it's being presented. Plus, does your organization need another blowhard in the conference room who controls the meeting with word salad? 5. Too much information being presented While everyone thinks that AI is controlling the review of every resume and that you need to have every keyword included in your resume to make it to the next step when applying, the truth is that at some point the resume will be reviewed by a human. Professionally written resumes tend to be jam packed with information with visually stunning sections, tables of information, and varying fonts to draw the eye – but it’s just too much for the reader to comprehend what you’ve actually done. Why it’s a red flag: Employers are looking for future leaders who know how to convey their thoughts, ideas, questions succinctly. So if you are unable to accomplish this with your resume – that you’ve had plenty of time to write, edit, modify before distributing – what will happen when you’re on the job presenting in the boardroom? Final Thoughts A professionally written resume isn’t inherently bad, many candidates benefit from outside help, especially if they’re unsure how to present themselves. However, authenticity matters. When hiring managers sense that a resume doesn’t align with the person behind it, they’ll dig deeper and often move on to more transparent candidates.  Resumes are personal. They are a summary of all that one has accomplished in their career. This is their professional fingerprint and no one else should have the same fingerprint. So, make sure that the next time you are updating or creating a new resume, make it yours, not someone else’s or trying to be someone you’re not.
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